5月24日,美国文化教育委员会主席Gessner博士应邀到本中心,与几十名高二学生分享了他累积的关于美国大学申请及课余活动陈述和个人陈述写作的经验。Gessner博士曾在芝加哥大学、约翰霍普金斯大学等美国名校做过教学、行政及招生工作,也曾在芝加哥大学附属的高中做过大学升学指导工作。
Gessner博士提醒学子们,在选择美国大学时不要过度考虑大学的所在地(在哪一个州,处于城市或小城镇,位于市中心或郊区,那里的气候如何,等等)。毕竟,学生的首要任务是学习,所以择校时要首先考虑学校的学术声誉。
他还提醒学子,不要过度考虑大学的综合排名。譬如一个有意工程学的学子,应该搜索哪些大学在工程学方面的学术声誉高。综合排名很靠前的哈佛、耶鲁等名校,在工程专业上不如一些排名可能在30或40 左右的学校。另外,若是女生,可以考虑到女校就读,理由之一是,相对而言,她们被录取的概率会稍微偏大一些。Gessner博士举例说,位于麻州的女校Smith College有很出色的工程专业,对想学工程的女生来说,就是很好的选择。
关于奖学金,Gessner博士说,总体而言,国际学生从私立大学得到奖学金的概率较之从公立大学获得奖学金的概率大。但若是自己付学费,公立大学的学费相对便宜,但是公立大学一般对本州公民有学费优惠,对留学生来说,肯定不能享受该优惠,所以学费也不太便宜。部分公立大学对国际学生的收费接近私立大学的收费。
在课余活动陈述写作上,Gessner博士强调要写得简单明了,最好只讲一种活动,讲得深且透,不要罗列几种活动且每种活动只是谈一点肤浅的认识。一定要记得写为什么选择这一活动,以及活动中如何解决问题并有何种收获,不要在对活动的描述中过分强调个人,否则可能给人自我炫耀的印象。以下是Gessner博士认为较出色的一篇活动陈述文章的片段。
I have always been concerned about the environment, which started when we studied plants and animals in 5th grade. In 10th grade I wanted to get involved in environmental activities and since we had no such clubs, I did some research and discovered the“Roots and Shoots” organization and started a club with help from one of my teachers…My biggest challenge was recruiting students and convincing them that this was worthwhile. I got a video from“R and S” which explained the environmental problems and showed how we could make a difference on the local level by planting trees. The students were won over and we started the next Saturday planting. I have learned promotional, organizational, and leadership skills from my role as President but more importantly I and my fellow students have learned that we can make a small difference which when combined with others around the world will have a big impact on our planet.
在个人陈述写作上,博士指出,一般说来,招生官只有约5分钟的时间来读一篇陈述,所以开头直白很关键,能勾起招生官仔细读完该文章的兴趣是关键。切忌在开头部分让人看得一头雾水,不知写作者试图要讲什么。以下是博士举例的一篇陈述中开门见山的首段。
“When I was 12 we moved from the country to a big city. Only then did I realize that I had spent the first 12 years of my life not fitting in. Most of the children in our country town had many animals, rode horses, and spent most of their time out of doors. I stayed indoors, read books, and drew pictures. Once I got to the city, I met others who shared my interests…”
博士指出,写个人陈述的关键是重点突出,禁忌之一是在文章中生拼硬凑很多生僻的单词,以为这样做能让招生官觉得自己词汇量丰富。他说,对于中国学生来说,这一毛病比较突出,而且由于英语对中国学子来说不是母语,学生在用这些难词偏词时,还经常用错,给招生官留下负面印象。中国学生一定要引以为戒。记住:个人陈述是一个申请者写作技巧和个性的体现,招生官对申请者的词汇量并不是很在意。
最后,博士还提议中国学生在选择个人陈述主题时,以选申请学校列出的主题中的一个为好。以自选主题写文章,一般来说,难度系数更大,除非申请者的确有非常好的主题,且深信自己能把握好该主题的写作,否则还是保守一点为好,也就是从大学列出的主题中选一个。